You've improved your production alot as I can see here. This beat really moves you and It's nice to hear a good song on newgrounds in the midst of all the bad ones I come across.
Although, there is one thing I must point out and I'm not sure if you've noticed, but that melody from 0:33 to 2:02 was used in one of Tiestos songs "Insomnia" (youtube it).
Yes, this is one of every producers's biggest fears: accidentally using a melody that they think they came up with, but not realizing it came from their long term unconscious memory of another song.
...I guess you could call this a remix or remake instead?
I just forgot the name of the song ...
Earlier I put on Newground track with the title "ReMixXX"
Thank you for help and attention: DDD
Pretty good so far
You should definitely continue this as I see it blossoming into a great song. Nice melodies, bass, buildup, and closeout, although I think your kick drum could have been more prominent. It was abit quiet and flat. That is my only peeve though, everything else was fine. Keep it up!
Dude this is decent, now add a snare drum and some hats or something to make it 10.5/10!
We must go deeper...
A purse... within a purse... within a purse... within a newgrounds song
XD... And i thought no one would understand...
nice voice you have there
the instrument mastering is perfect, and I have to agree with the guy below, the voice can be abit loud at times. It will make it about 1 star better to 10/10.
thanks m8! ill buy myself a new mic when i get money ! :D
only 1 problem with this, the mastering. Some of the volumes are wrong and maybe try adding alittle compression to the song or something.
Other than that it was actually better than most house I've seen on NG
It makes me feel honored to see remixes of my songs, but it makes me even more honored if the remixer made a good remix.
Nicely produced and mastered.
I liked the percussion and drums you used.
The synthesized voice just finishes it off.
I felt that it was kind of empty in some areas where that bell was just going by itself
yeah that's the "ding" sound effect from windows, but I was looking for some kind of transition back to the original chord patter, maybe I'll fix it up later or something
how do you master your stuff so that it feels like its filling up my ears? I have trouble doing that. I always just throw on maximus clear master and i never get the feel i want :p
Hip hop career
- you're going somewhere
- you have your own style
- it sounds professional
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