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Use fl studio 8 or 9

It's a much easier and cheaper program to use. Trust me I made 11 songs with the DEMO version of FL studio. and It has more effects and sounds (6,3hundred and something presets). hundreds of mixing effects and more. But other than that. this song is pretty good bro. It is kinda edging on the dNB side though (Drum N Bass).
4/5
8/10

spacepirate117 responds:

Well, yes I would agree but I got pretty lazy with this one and only used one package of samples so it sounded rather repetitive. Sorry bout that :P

awesome

dude, you definitely put it into the WRONG GENRE. This isn't techno lol. Please fix that man. People will get you wrong. But on the bright side:

This is a black guy telling you that this is a really good rap song. keep it up bro. I can see this on top weekly 5. You could be a rapstar oneday if you keep THIS up.

But I must tell you. I..AM... SO IMPRESSED for a FIRST submissiont to NG? My first submission wasn't as good at this and it was techno.

not bad

Just needs some work thats all. Try to make your bass synths not as distorted please. It is actually a really good hardcore melody to it. Just try to add more sounds in there. And basically just remaster it. Choose a different bass.

It's a really good start to making hardcore techno though =)

GL on future submissions bro.

DJ-Spark responds:

Thanks! I'll Try that out!

THIS was your first song?

Wow I am quite impressed. I love it when I see people with 4/5 or better first songs. Good work bro. I am proud of you. My first song sucked. But I see a good future for you in music. You could become Gravey II (two). My only problem would have to be the repetition on this song. Try to put another melody in everynow and then please. But I do love that airy-rainforest effect you added.

4/5
9/10.

you deserve it

=)

HOLY MOTHER OF GOD!!!!!!

646 votes
5772 listens
AND FREAKING 903,273 DOWNLOADS???????????!!!?!?!?!?!?!!!??
!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!???!?!?!?!???????!?!?
?!?!??!!!!???!!?!?!?!?????????????!!?
??????????????!?! WHat is the number one ranking song on ng? I wanna find out. One other thing also, why is it that there is 180times the amount of downloads than listens? that is not newgroundly possible. But how? I see alot of paragonx9's songs like that and some others too. But how can they have more downloads than listens? It just doesn't make sense.

wOw

this was your first song? SERIOUSLY? wow. I am quite impressed with you and your life. You are a talented person and you will be BIGGER than basshunter (I hope he doesn't see this) and all of the other electronic music makers out there. Keep up your good work!

WOW

Wow this song is so cool. It's definitely going on my fav's! Keep it up bro. I can definitely see this in a dance rave right now. Like my homecoming highschool dance I have once a month haha. I am actually not surprised this made top weekly, it deserves to be. This is going to make you really big on NG and you should continue your music making career and become famous one day.
Enjoy the money rolling in from selling your CD'S!

WOW

This is the best "first" techno song I have ever heard. NO wonder it had such great ratings. You should DEFINITELY add onto this one and master it. Try to make it less repetitive also by adding some more melodies into there. I can definitely see the mastered version of this on top weekly 5. Try to get better at using the music program (I use FL Studio 8 for all of my songs). If you use fl studio 8 or 9, look for warbeats on youtube. mixing effects, automations, filtering effects etc. I can see you going somewhere with your music career. Keep it up bro!

dude.

this is a remix of this one song called fantranstic by Wip3out! Plz put it as a remix of this right a way. I don't want you getting banned with this awesome remix. If you don't believe me, just check, trust me, I am not the only one that will notice this.

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/s ims/index.php?songid=14103

woot!

awesome song! I can definitely see this in a club or a rave somewhere. If you put some of your songs on much music, chances are, most likely most of them will be on top20 on 20.

SubtleForces responds:

Thanks again for ur kind review and score :D

I hope it does, but ur song deserves it too :P

I'm currently a music producer, and a future club/party/rave/what ever DJ.

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