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[Twinky Wiener Sandwich part 34]

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SIGH. sounds like you were blowing into a tube of somekind. I tried saving this too, BUT THERE ARE SOOOOO MANY VOTES OF ZERO!!!!!! I think thats telling you a message.
about 99% of your songs and music. I mean, WHAT IS THIS???!?!?!?!!??!?!!

[When a boy meets a fish pt 30]

I tried this

I tried saving this song for you, but I guess i failed miserably seeing as there are so MANY VOTES OF ZERO!

[Laser-Wielding Chimneysweep 29]

lets just say.....

It needs plenty of work. because All I can hear is the sharp loud sound of a guitar too close to the microphone. You may want to fix that lol ~XD~ In fact.. FIX EVERYTHING.
Now I think I'm going to go and die now. <(-_-)>To forget the memory of ever hearing this.
See you in 6 months. You may die of this too you know. <(-_-)>

[The Noob Extinction Theme]

not too relaxing

You may want to slow the BPM or something or put more relaxing sound effects in. Like the constant background one that had only 3 pitches was quite relaxing. Other than that, It still sounded pretty cool

[-=| Neon Filter |=-]

OMFG

This song is so awesome... I would definitely download this.
has a GREAT flow. And its ur first song too? dude, ur paragon jr.
your later songs could become popular and You will be like another DimRain47.
But I really like the pitch the song is at from 0:00 to 1:52. You should keep a large majority of the song like that lol instead of changing it 2wice. But it had a great slow flow. Perfect bpm and It always keep u captivated. KUTGW dude. make more

Btw, I make techno/ trance too. Why don't you check it out?

[clean day [BBB]]

this song has a great flow...

Its just needs abit more variety in the first 2 minutes 40 secs. But also another thing you might wanna fix is the background effect that comes in at 0:10 begins to get annoying after a while. Maybe try to put less of that in the song lol. Thats all I have to say ~XD~
keep up the good work dude =). The song still sounded pretty cool. Has a great flow to keep up moving. Good work with the bass.

Hey, did you know that i also make Techno/Trance? Why don't you check some out?

Bobo-boy responds:

thanks i gonna work on it

gonna look for your songs,..

[BBB]

[Undertow (Finding Air)]

this has a great flow...

GREAT... job with the Fruity mixer effects ( if you use fl studio) or whatever its called on the program that you use. I see you did alot of work on this. Its just that there needs to be background sound for the first 52 seconds.
Now I'm happy that you put bass in the end, but don't you think there needs to be bass throughout most of the song? Then it would be even cooler than it already is.
But anyway, this is just me nitpicking on purpose lol. Its actually a really good song. ~XD~KUTGW BTW.

I make techno & trance songs. Why don't you check some out? i JUST uploaded one

roensb responds:

thank you for the input. i was thinking of going through and changing some stuff on this one so your ideas help in that aspect. oh and i use logic pro btw and there aren't any like special effects, these are pre-made synths that i used (the sound not the notes)

[FIRST SONG [DEMO] !!!]

Interesting loop.

Actually, it's a good start... Needs plenty of work though. Nice try for your first submission though ^___^

Make more. You can only get better. And so will my ratings for you :D

Omnigon responds:

Wow thanks! I've been given the kick in the pants to proceed with the betterments of future works.

[viva california]

lol, some idiot zero bombed it.

its actually ntoa bad song. It had 1 vote of zero, So i quickly saved it for u. Its actually a pretty good punk song.

simpli responds:

thanks a lot. :)

[Dj-GloStix - Enigma]

5/5

self explanatory. I have no criticisms on it at all. I'm left wordless to say something bad about ur song. I would definitely dance to this. I'm jealous of this song lol.
KUTGW. and make more! gl on future submissions.

Hey, do you mind checking out some of my songs (techno-trance)?
I would really appreciate that.

Dj-GloStix responds:

Sure thing,
I'm really glad you enjoyed and don't worry, I'll always be making more.
Have been doing this for 5 years now.
Check out my website for more.
http://www.jameswmann.com