lol dude, umm..
This song is pretty good, its just good and short!!! plz oh plz make it longer, Im glad u said its still a work in progress. This good song song needs to be longer.
And also, anotehr thing, try not to take so much time actualy "getting into" the song. Because it was half done by the time it was "into" the song.
Other than that, it was still pretty cool. Keep uphte good work dude ~XD~
Would u mind checking out some of my songs? I woould really appreciate it. ~XD~