DaveGuy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mini Desert Song]

Hey your first song!

I know you used that preset pad arp called texture haha! I know alot of preset synths. Just try to put a melody in there, because right now It would be REALLY good in a scary flash animation where the robot warriors are w8ing for the zombies to approach and appear out of the floating mist upon us haha.
Yno, my first song isn't even on NG. In fact I don't even know where the original is anymore. It's only 54 seconds long and sucks.

ON the bright side to this, It DOES have that dark and creepy desert effect to it.
Keep it up, youre learning, I used all presets in my first song too.
5/5
6/10 for now buddy. I can promise you that you will get better at this.

SuperKirbyMaster responds:

lol @ the robot warriors part. Thanks for the review, I'll follow the advice.

[_/Written\_]

awesome!

the buildup was abit too long but I like a slow trance song so congratulations. I really love the piano too and the filtering effects.
keep up the good work. you're getting better at trance already.
5/5
9/9

ShootingStar responds:

Haha...thanks for the review!

ShootingStar

[Neimer-Two Hearts Together]

forget about grinberg

I reported his review abusive.
He will lose his right to review. Well, some of his other reviews suck too.
(I checked).

What this song really deserves is something good!
Good job bro! Simple, but impressive. Keep up the good work.
5/5
9/9

[U4E-uh [Tranzphonic]]

lol

that's like saying "breathing, minus the oxygen". hahaha!

It's a pretty good song bro! keep it up, just try to add some variety in there. It got really repetitive. Maybe some new melodies in some different parts of the song?
4/5
8/10 for now buddy. You're off to a good start though!

[-PdG- Solstice (WiP Updated)]

I love this song!

please extend this into something long and good! I can definitely see this on the front pages and possibly top weekly 5 too if you extend it also.

If it is already this good as a WIP, then who knows what the finished version would be like?

Prodigal responds:

The finished version will be like sex.

[Do You Feel]

I hope this doesn't get zerobombed.

with 3votes of 5.00
and with mine 4 votes of 5.00 (-0.000040) Just makes it more zerobomb proof.
Bring out the voice some more. The voice needs to be mixed as well, It sounds too "recorded on a microphone" if you know what I mean.

KUTGW, make more music like this. Put more of the hihat and the saw synth in there too.

[Colour My World]

just like reasoner - Living transparent

NO I don't mean that in a bad way at all, I'm just saying it is a piano solo haha (don't get me wrong here lol haha!). Very calming indeed, I can see this playing in an expensive classy restaurant where a 1 oz piece of steak is $1200 per chew.
I am quite impressed with this. keep it up. I generally don't like jazz but you sure got my vote with this one. I could study to this also. GOOD JOB!!

5/5
10*points
and a 1 oz steak for $1199 per chew (I'm giving you a very good discount HAHA)

[The Kid Jacked The Car!]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

THIS IS HILARIOUS!!

10*points
5/5
+1 fav!

you're awesome!

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

IRIRIBIBIBIBIBLBLBLBLLLLEEE!!! Your awesome :D

[[RM] - Starry Sky WIP]

you should delete this from NG

the real one has become popular man. I hate keeping WIPS on my account but I get "packratty" as well and keep it on there. I can see you have made afew mastering changes to this. It's kinda like paragonx9 having chaoz fantasy wip on her account with 219 listens 18 downloads, and 4 reviews with a score of 4.27.

You can keep it on if you want and show people "hey, this is the WIP of my song" that would be a good idea. You have 2 choices man.

5/5 10/10 btw 4.24(+0.034) = 4.27

[[RM] - Calmly Night WIP]

yayyyy randomizor!!!

I love your music! It's unique from most trance nowadays. It's calming

Randomizor responds:

Thanks. haha =3