I AM SO IMPRESSED
for your first song this is amazing. YOu will get good someday I can just tell. This itself already deserves an 8. If a first song get's an 8 you KNOW that's a good sign.
Why don't you try using FL studio for 49.99 U.S.D or just get the demo so you can't save and just save as an MP3 whenever your done and re-import into FL studio whenever you want to work on it again. (just drag from folder or harddrive into the pattern playlist. the 49.99 version can save as an FL studio file JUST so that you won't have to rearrange the notes all the time.
To tell you the truth, I make all of my songs with the demo version of FL studio.
Why don't you check them out?