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some good parts

from 0:00 - 0:10
from 0:36 - 0:46 THOSE WERE THE AWESOEM PARTS, try and put more of that into ur songs, the rest of the parts were.. mm.. okay, but plz put more of those parts into ur songs. Thats what would make it sound good. But i still really liked it though. keep up the good work ~XD~

Say, i make techno music, do u mind checking it out? tell me what u think....

its good but

The one thing u have to fix is the kick drum AND I PROMISE YOU I WILL GIVE YOU A 10/10. Im just imagining it in my head : without the kick = better than chaos fantasy. If u do fix up the kick drum , PLZ make an extended version. I promise u it will get into the top weekly newgrounds because i can just imagine it sounding Amazing.
It sounded pretty cool too.

Hey i make techno music too. why dont u check it out?

thedude9 responds:

I was nervous about the kick. I was never really good at drumming lol :)

I try and find a different one, or make that one sound better in the full version.

thanks for the review! -thedude9

P.S. Awesome songs man!

take it easy on the synths.

and on 1:01 it just gets transformed into something totally random.
And please make ur leading synth (the very beginning of the song) quieter throughout the song.

DJKitsune responds:

Thank you for the review. I will definately consider what you suggested and try to make my next song better with the advice.

its good but.

Its a good song for relaxiing, and its coming quite close to an ambient song.
Please make it alot more livelier, and i have to agree with HakitaSasaki, It gets repetitive & needs more kick on the bass. Surprisingly it still sounded good.

lidlurch responds:

thanks for the review! hm...yeah, deffinetly i'll work on that. i'll email all of you guys when i finish a second draft of the song

video game music, not trance dude

Sounds like acute type of creepiness, like the voodoo dolls. Pretty good yo, just add more background sounds to it dude. Keep up the good work.

Btw, i make techno music, why dont u check it out?

good yo.

Wow, I liked how u just started layering things on every period of seconds. Thats what makes this song good for a slow part of a video game. Keep up the good work yo. Just try adding a"bit" more liveliness to it like another sound or synth or something.

Say, why dont u check out my songs? I make techno music.

lol sounds more like a video game song to me.

Just needs a alot more livelier bass, dude but the synth that comes in at 0:47 is what makes this song really good. Its just that bass would make it like chaos fantasy, trust me. One thing i also liked is that its in the same keytone as my song
"dreams of happiness" overall, the song i was cool.
you should check out my other songs too dude lol XD.

Connmann1015 responds:

yeah agreed on the bass thing. Dude you only have three songs and i did. i loved em!

Its pretty good yo

Its good but, it just needs to have a REALLY loud bass, like the type u hear when people are blasting it out of their cars, if u did that, Then I would give it a 10/10. But the song right now is actually really good for dancing dude. Keep up the good work and Gl on future submissions.

would u mind checking out some of my songs? I also make techno music lol.

Good shyt!!!!

wow, im quite impressed, still not as good as chaos fantasy, but reallllly good job with the synths and the rising effect at 1:08 it just.. "gets u going".
Keep up the good work yo.

would u mind checking out some of my techno songs?
I would really appreciate it. XD

Randomizor responds:

Haha thanks for the review! =D

Sure ill go check out your stuff.

srry dude

answer to what u said : not really. Try to improve ur singing

370wii responds:

I was being sarcastic, lol

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