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[_/Closer\_]

just like lost temple

great as ever. Keep it up! You never disappoint me. Try to compress the kick abit though. It could feel it but I couldn't hear it.

ShootingStar responds:

yay Haha alrighty I'll check that out!
Thanks for the review!!

ShootingStar

[Rushing sounds (hardstyle)]

constructive criticism!

if you are going to make a hardcore song the kick has to be stronger. Its loud enough, its just not powerful. That effect at 1:33 sounds annoying by itself. please add some extra stuff to there please. and when the drums and bass come in after that, lower the volume of that effect.
other than that it sounded like a generic hardstyle song but it was still good!
even so. I am not suprised that the guy below me gave a 10/10.

dynamizer responds:

you pointed out the exact problems
i saw with this song...
that tells me you have a good ear and
I 100% agree!Will fix and thanks a bunch!

[Technological Jazz finalcrapft]

hooray!

the part at 1:33 was cool!\
much improved!

lidlurch responds:

thanks! and thanks for the great score! I used alot of garage band loops xD

[_/Lost Temple\_]

hooray!

JUST LOVE the powerful kick and the EQ'ing and the dancy feel to it.
How did you figure out how to get a powerful kick?

ShootingStar responds:

Haha its a different kick i used :)
But thanks for the review!!

ShootingStar

[~***Astronomy***~]

Hooray for vacuums!

This song definitely reminds me of stars and comets and things. The title is perfect for it! Very impressive that you came up with this in just 2 days after another brain vacuum. The intruments are just right and the drums are at the right EQ.

P.S. What is it like to have a vacuum nozzle attached to your head for hours on end?

Isoken responds:

I think part of my brain has disapp-

[[IMD]~//Winter Lights\\]

the kick drum

The kick drum stopped this into turning into what could've become a great song.
It is just annoying and offtone. If you were trying to do hardstyle, only IF you were trying to do hardstyle, make the kick stronger and make the after effect be ontone.

And yeah, I know you said it was repetitive but it just doesn't bother me that much..oh well that's just me. Kick's the only problem then.
BTW, the melodies are good!

IceMasterDlux responds:

Hey, thanks for the review man! I really appreciate somebody taking time to do that. I'll keep that in mind with the kick and I'm really glad you liked the melodies because that it my fav part of a song. I'm glad that you don't mind the repetitiveness. Thanks again man!
~Ice Master

[Dj-C -FireFlies RemiX]

amazing

Some of your best work.

5.1/5
10/10

I love this remix. This would be very good for a videogame relating something flying through the sky. That's what I thought of. Everything is perfect. Great job!

Chimy727 responds:

lol thanks! i was waiting for your review!
:D

-chimy727

[Musical Evolution]

That unknown genre is

windows. Noticed it immediately. Now I deserve a cookie ({}).
Your music has always been creative and unique

Step responds:

Oh, lol I knew you would XD. Sorry, but I'm out of cookies :\. Oh well, thanks for the great review and compliments, and I hope you got my PM XD.

[Breakneck Melody {DJ-Abbic}]

hell yes 320 kbps rules.

Once again you are still forgetting the strong overpowering bassline to go with the kick drum. I like how when there is a kick drum, then the volume goes down and then the kick comes off and then it's all good. It sounds like fruity balance mixing effect! It has a really good hardcore melody. You are just missing that bassline in key of C after every kick. I can hear it in there yes, It is just no where near loud enough.

so 9/10 for now bud =).

good title btw!

DjAbbic responds:

Can't reopen it I got demo version =\

[Merry Christmas (Ringtone)]

haha

cheesy holiday spirit! This made me laugh I'm sorry. I would definitely have this as my ringtone for the month of december.
It loops almost perfectly too. Good job! It reminds me of that game on miniclip called deep freeze with the type of instruments you used.

DJ-Chilvan responds:

Haha, I'm glad you liked it! Yea, it's pretty funny, but all ringtones are funny haha =P.
My instrument choice was pretty simple---I only used poizone xD.
Well, I'm glad you would use this as a ringtone! Due to positive feedback, I'm planning to make a lot more Christmas themed ringtones, especially since it takes no more than 30 minutes to make one. I'll start making original ones too.