sounds cool
congrats on top weekly 5, One of my constructive criticisms is that I see you put like a soundgoodizer thing on the bass, so it doesn't sound low enough. Or at least I think it's a goodizer. Maybe just add another bassline and keep one there rather than replacing it with a lower bass.
The kick drum is good although it may be unnecessary, just maybe raise the kickdrum by abit, but you don't have to.
the synths and melodies were good Not too repetitive so that's good also =).
I liked that piano that was on a fast delay. good job!
I like that bongo sounding synth that was just the star of it all. Without that it would sound kinda boring.
One thing else I noticed was a slight phasing on the bass. That was just totally cool.
keep it up bro!
This is areally good song and I just can't wait to hear the full version of it. congrats but sorry at the same time that the unfinished version had to make top weekly, although it is ALREADY worth being on the top 5, no doubt about that.