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[[IMD]~//Winter Lights\\]

the kick drum

The kick drum stopped this into turning into what could've become a great song.
It is just annoying and offtone. If you were trying to do hardstyle, only IF you were trying to do hardstyle, make the kick stronger and make the after effect be ontone.

And yeah, I know you said it was repetitive but it just doesn't bother me that much..oh well that's just me. Kick's the only problem then.
BTW, the melodies are good!

IceMasterDlux responds:

Hey, thanks for the review man! I really appreciate somebody taking time to do that. I'll keep that in mind with the kick and I'm really glad you liked the melodies because that it my fav part of a song. I'm glad that you don't mind the repetitiveness. Thanks again man!
~Ice Master

[Dj-C -It Ends. {wip}]

congratulations

You just got added to my favorite artists list..or I might have done that already...anyway you still won a consolation prize seeing as you already have the grand one: here's a cookie.
({})

I like your style of dance; it's unique to anything I have seen with all of the instruments and effect you use. I just think of the word "chimy".

[Dj-C -FireFlies RemiX]

amazing

Some of your best work.

5.1/5
10/10

I love this remix. This would be very good for a videogame relating something flying through the sky. That's what I thought of. Everything is perfect. Great job!

Chimy727 responds:

lol thanks! i was waiting for your review!
:D

-chimy727

[Musical Evolution]

That unknown genre is

windows. Noticed it immediately. Now I deserve a cookie ({}).
Your music has always been creative and unique

Step responds:

Oh, lol I knew you would XD. Sorry, but I'm out of cookies :\. Oh well, thanks for the great review and compliments, and I hope you got my PM XD.

[Breakneck Melody {DJ-Abbic}]

hell yes 320 kbps rules.

Once again you are still forgetting the strong overpowering bassline to go with the kick drum. I like how when there is a kick drum, then the volume goes down and then the kick comes off and then it's all good. It sounds like fruity balance mixing effect! It has a really good hardcore melody. You are just missing that bassline in key of C after every kick. I can hear it in there yes, It is just no where near loud enough.

so 9/10 for now bud =).

good title btw!

DjAbbic responds:

Can't reopen it I got demo version =\

[Merry Christmas (Ringtone)]

haha

cheesy holiday spirit! This made me laugh I'm sorry. I would definitely have this as my ringtone for the month of december.
It loops almost perfectly too. Good job! It reminds me of that game on miniclip called deep freeze with the type of instruments you used.

DJ-Chilvan responds:

Haha, I'm glad you liked it! Yea, it's pretty funny, but all ringtones are funny haha =P.
My instrument choice was pretty simple---I only used poizone xD.
Well, I'm glad you would use this as a ringtone! Due to positive feedback, I'm planning to make a lot more Christmas themed ringtones, especially since it takes no more than 30 minutes to make one. I'll start making original ones too.

[Submergence - Elixir]

wow

You have got some talent here sir. I was mindshocked by this. You have probably made plenty of money off of your music now sir.
Good Job!
I like how the drums go for 3/4 16ths in the beginning instead of how general trance songs have the drums going all the way through. Very creative! I hope you understand what I just said there lol haha.

I like the melody you used there too. I like everything you used in this.
YOU just got yourself:

10*points
5/5
+1 fav
A DOWNLOAD
Some food, water, cookies, and shelter to keep you going through your journey on this weeks top 5 which is where this song deserves to be.

Submergence responds:

Thanks for the great review!

_submergence

[Russian Roulette]

pretty cool!

Chuck Norris played russian roulette with a fully loaded gun and won.

Period.

[PureX (Final State)]

cool

for firsts, intro was too long, should have brought the kick drum in earlier in the song.
The bass was too high pitch, you need a low bass pitched bassline in a dance song. I had troubles with that ones haha. The drum track sounded cool, except the kick drum was not nearly powerful enough. It was sorta missing something too. I dunno, it just felt like it needed something else.

Although it is a good start, It's an 8/10 for now.
Hope I didn't give too much con-crit lol (constructive criticism).

On the bright side, the melody was cool and the voice got me interested again.

=)

Don't get me wrong, it's not a bad song.

DavidRx responds:

no no not at all =D i need reviews like this thx man ^^
yea the intro is to long...soo many can lose intrest and actualy close the page or something D= xD

hmmm low bas u mean like...instead of a C5...i put a C4 to blend in? yea it would give some more bass n power to it =D

kick drums...yea ima start put layers of kicks and EQ's =D
so i can get the sound i want and get em whit POWER =D RAAAWR x3

xD

many thx for the Con-Crit dude =D helps me a bunch...i hope u pm me about the cristmas track or ill will DOOM U D= xD
haha jk...

thx for the review yet again

DrX out

[-=Azure Gates=-]

wow

so much going on in this one song. It should have a downbeat bassline in some parts though, that's the only thing wrong with it. Other than that, everything is worth a 6/5 11/10.