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swag

You've improved your production alot as I can see here. This beat really moves you and It's nice to hear a good song on newgrounds in the midst of all the bad ones I come across.

Although, there is one thing I must point out and I'm not sure if you've noticed, but that melody from 0:33 to 2:02 was used in one of Tiestos songs "Insomnia" (youtube it).

Yes, this is one of every producers's biggest fears: accidentally using a melody that they think they came up with, but not realizing it came from their long term unconscious memory of another song.
...I guess you could call this a remix or remake instead?

kirja100 responds:

Yeaaa..
I just forgot the name of the song ...
Earlier I put on Newground track with the title "ReMixXX"
Thank you for help and attention: DDD

Pretty good so far

You should definitely continue this as I see it blossoming into a great song. Nice melodies, bass, buildup, and closeout, although I think your kick drum could have been more prominent. It was abit quiet and flat. That is my only peeve though, everything else was fine. Keep it up!

kirja100 responds:

Thank you!!

We must go deeper...

A purse... within a purse... within a purse... within a newgrounds song

Aliaspharow's: "PERCEPTION"

aliaspharow responds:

XD... And i thought no one would understand...

nice voice you have there

the instrument mastering is perfect, and I have to agree with the guy below, the voice can be abit loud at times. It will make it about 1 star better to 10/10.

Wooormy responds:

thanks m8! ill buy myself a new mic when i get money ! :D

impressive

great job you've done here; great song composition and instrument choice, great drum choice, non repetitive, loving the arp @ 0:14...

(P.S. it almost sounds almost more like a dnb/videogame track more than trance.)
Hey can you check out my newest house WIP and maybe give me some feedback? thankyou

Chimy727 responds:

hehe thanks! It is sorta a different trance style, but im really liking it! :D
sure thing!
thanks!
-dj-greene.

Potential for this hoohaa

I must say, I would impressed with the intro as well as the DRUMS! but when the melody came in @ 0:20, some problems were created:

- Try using a different instrument or reducing how much that one cuts into my ears, and try to maybe change something @ 0:48, because that's where it gets repetitive.

- Nice finish @ 1:22, the end. Extend this bro, this could bloom into something crazy!

Can you check out some of my songs please? thankyou :)
Regards ~Dj DO~

djhoohaa responds:

thanks for the listen xD

hi treysen! remember me?

You've got a pretty good song going on there. Now it's just to extend the song, add maybe a hihat and snare/clap/ whatevers necessary treble drums. Also @ 1:17, I was expecting something abit more added to the song rather than a repeat of 0:38 - 1:13 which makes it slightly repetitive.

Other than that, I think I'll give this a 5/5 because it's a good song :)
You've improved musically since I last saw you
~DjDO~

Treysen responds:

Of course I remember you!! And thanks for the helpful review! I definitely will be working more on this ;)

Thank you!~

finally...

you got top weekly 5, you deserve it for this song.

MrFijiWiji responds:

:D thnx dave

wow

Nice mastering and an overall great remix

5/5
10/10
by me

~DjDO~

MrFijiWiji responds:

thnx dave!

wow

amazing job with mixing the genres, this is electrohouse AND funk at the same time.

5/5
10/10 by me

~DjDO~

DISTRIX responds:

Haha, thanks for the review! :D

I'm currently a music producer, and a future club/party/rave/what ever DJ.

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