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[SubtleForces - Mandala WiP]

good melody!

You're getting better at hardstyle, it's just that the kick is WAY too quiet!
I need to feel it bro! Everything else is good. that's my only criticism.

SubtleForces responds:

Well, I have ajusted that now ;)

You just need to wait fir the final version ;P
Ty again Dave

-SubtleForces

[[RM] - Morphilize WIP2]

yay randomizor!!

I haven't heard a song from you in a while. You could be a famous chill artist in the future you know. I just feel that this song builds up abit too quickly to bring the full drumtrack in there. Sort of take it slower like you did with starry sky. But I can definitely see improvement in your skills here. 5/5 10/10. This could make top weekly 5 if you're lucky.

Can you please check out my newest trance song called"my life is good'? I would really appreciate that thank you.

Randomizor responds:

I'll have it all finished and worked out in the final version. =]

I already reviewed bud. ;D

Thanks for the review. =3

[Sandy Winds]

I found a match!

Yno how the other song I reviewed "just keep it simple(loop)". If that one is perfect for the start menu, then this one is good for the actual game! Someone should use this! Advertise this in the forums.

[Just Keep It Simple (loop)]

pretty good

the only problem is that the kick sounds very distorted and messed up. And why is that violiny thing balanced to be louder in one earphone? It's sortof annoying. It seems like the type of song that is good for a start menu loop of a video game or something. The melody was pretty good also!

ET16 responds:

lol you know i have know idea why it does that maybe its the volume as for the violin maybe its the pan will fix soon

[(J-Yo) F.Y.M.D. [WIP]]

pretty good

the clap was really annoying in the beginning, it sort of bummed out the lead synth melody there. Until that other synth came in at around 0:54 or whenever. But still try to lower the reverb on that thing. That's basically my only criticism for this song!

[Trance_Rays Of White (preview)]

sound quality?

HOW did you get the sound quality to sound so good on YOUTUBE??????!!? Everytime I uploadstuff to youtube, the sound quality gets raped bigtime.
Please tell me how. You're probably the only person I will ever find out about this.

back on topic:

The song itself was really good, everything was perfect actually. I have no criticisms because I don't know how to.

IN FACT, I'll even attempt to criticize this song right now:

um.......claps are abit quiet? Srry, that's all I got for you buddy -_-
keep it up!

MrAw3s0me responds:

lol thx , eum for the sound quality i used windows movie maker and selected one of the presets ( best quality for playback , wich was recomended ) , at start the sound quality was all screwed up when i could read the video , but i learned that youtube still encode some time after the video is uploaded and watchable. Of cours the mastering i made helped for that qualty , but its just about the good sampling rate that fit with youtube rate , u might wanna check their FAQ about this , they explain some of the option best for HQ. have a nice day :)

[Euphoria]

good mix

It's a good mix of all three, congratulations. The melodyline is abit repetitive though, you may want to fix that up a bit, I understand that you tried though. But you know what, it would be interesting to see you put words into your songs! You should totally try it.

good job overall. This is most ambient overall.

Hey do you mind checking out my newest trance song called "my life is good"? I would really like that!

DJ-Chilvan responds:

Thanks! Yea, well, the melody was just random patterns that came into my head, i didnt really focus much on it=P. Eyy, i've been pretty caught up lately so I havent really been able to review stuff. I have heard a couple of your new releases though, including "My Life is Good." Like always, they're amazing! I will review that one right now. I actually am planning to start adding lyrics. I have the mic but i just need an adequate sound card that would make it easier. But since this is a three day weekend for me, I'll probably do some experimenting with my mic and autotune tomorrow to see what I can do.
Thanks again!

[Living On Video(DanceLoop]

really good

Definitely extend it. I think the crowd was abit too loud in some parts though and the crowd didn't have breaks. That's my only criticism.
But yes, this could be something great.

kirja100 responds:

Thanks man!!!

[TBD-TranceTest]

keep it up

You've got yourself a good trance song possibly used in many flash submissions here. Extend this.

ToxicBlizzard responds:

awsome dude
thnx alot (:

[SubtleForces - Requiem]

very interesting

I haven't heard a good "strictly techno" song in a while. The melody was very memorable, it's just abit overused. That's my only criticism.
But it's not enough to take off a point.
5/5

SubtleForces responds:

Ye, melody was just a "four-bar" thing, but I tried to have the variation with different synths. I try :(