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[Mega death master mix 3000 P1]

this is not trance

it is techno and it is exactly half of the speed it's supposed to be. Double it.
Techno Isn't supposed to be this slow dude. 60-65 bpm? comeon!

Thats the only problem, the speed. I like the melody though. The melody is nice

=)

23i responds:

Allright. Well, I'm thinking drum 'n bass first before techno, because of the bpm. I really wanted to put this in trance too, maybe it is wrongly placed.

Thanks for the review.

[[RM] - Calmly Night]

I'm zerobombing you

JUST KIDDING JUST KIDDING JUST KIDDING JUST KIDDING JUST KIDDING
HAHAHA I totally scared you there buddy!

sorry about last review on your last resubmission, this deserves 5/5 10/10

I don't know what came upon me -_-

But I am still on that fact about the kick coming in afew seconds earlier into the song.

Randomizor responds:

Lol, thanks xD

[Walk on the Ceiling]

your first TECHNO song, ahhaaa just like me!

It badly need drums. and with all of those bass synths going in there it sounds kinda fuzzy and farty. Put some higher pitch melodies in there or just replace some bass melodies with high pitched ones. Try searching "saw" in the browser in fl studio and just keep pressing F2 until you get something you like (F2 shuffles through and finds other sounds with that name or phrase inside of it)

But I must admit, this is better than your first song. You're getting better I can tell!

=)

SuperKirbyMaster responds:

yay thanks for the advice, and keep up your good work =)

[Mini Desert Song]

Hey your first song!

I know you used that preset pad arp called texture haha! I know alot of preset synths. Just try to put a melody in there, because right now It would be REALLY good in a scary flash animation where the robot warriors are w8ing for the zombies to approach and appear out of the floating mist upon us haha.
Yno, my first song isn't even on NG. In fact I don't even know where the original is anymore. It's only 54 seconds long and sucks.

ON the bright side to this, It DOES have that dark and creepy desert effect to it.
Keep it up, youre learning, I used all presets in my first song too.
5/5
6/10 for now buddy. I can promise you that you will get better at this.

SuperKirbyMaster responds:

lol @ the robot warriors part. Thanks for the review, I'll follow the advice.

[_/Written\_]

awesome!

the buildup was abit too long but I like a slow trance song so congratulations. I really love the piano too and the filtering effects.
keep up the good work. you're getting better at trance already.
5/5
9/9

ShootingStar responds:

Haha...thanks for the review!

ShootingStar

[U4E-uh [Tranzphonic]]

lol

that's like saying "breathing, minus the oxygen". hahaha!

It's a pretty good song bro! keep it up, just try to add some variety in there. It got really repetitive. Maybe some new melodies in some different parts of the song?
4/5
8/10 for now buddy. You're off to a good start though!

[-PdG- Solstice (WiP Updated)]

I love this song!

please extend this into something long and good! I can definitely see this on the front pages and possibly top weekly 5 too if you extend it also.

If it is already this good as a WIP, then who knows what the finished version would be like?

Prodigal responds:

The finished version will be like sex.

[Colour My World]

just like reasoner - Living transparent

NO I don't mean that in a bad way at all, I'm just saying it is a piano solo haha (don't get me wrong here lol haha!). Very calming indeed, I can see this playing in an expensive classy restaurant where a 1 oz piece of steak is $1200 per chew.
I am quite impressed with this. keep it up. I generally don't like jazz but you sure got my vote with this one. I could study to this also. GOOD JOB!!

5/5
10*points
and a 1 oz steak for $1199 per chew (I'm giving you a very good discount HAHA)

[The Kid Jacked The Car!]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

THIS IS HILARIOUS!!

10*points
5/5
+1 fav!

you're awesome!

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

IRIRIBIBIBIBIBLBLBLBLLLLEEE!!! Your awesome :D