DaveGuy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Epic Riff (Awake Remix)]

8.5 / 10

My only problem is that the speed is a tad bit too much. Maybe if you slow that down abit, then It will be worth a 10. The melody was awesome, I like the melody.
I can see this in a DDR game though, good job man!

gave it a 4/5. KUTGW (keep up the good work).
It reminds me of this one really good trance song called: Elation by Koriigahn.
It is in the exact type of way that it is in terms of drum beats.

Hey did you know that I make techno music too? Do you mind checking that out?

Rawrthaas responds:

This is hardcore, not trance. It's not supposed to be 140 bpm music. Thanks for your review :)

[PT - StarJourney (Cubed Remix)]

this made me happy

thank you for making my day. It is a really happy melody. keep it up!

Hey did you know that I make techno too? do you mind checking that out for me please?

georgem124 responds:

Already have before now... =]

Glad you liked it...

I thought i would go for a chiptune/8-bit style techno song. I think it worked rather well =]

all credit actually goes to Joel Friar (Toxic Shock) for this one. i just made it better.

you can find the original on youtube under: Toxic shock - Cubed

[Illusion Chain [DEMO]]

I like the lead saw synth you used.

THis song is pretty good yo. Nice job. I love that starting kick with plenty of background reeverb for everything. Try to make it wayyy less repetitive. That is the stereotype for techno today. Those are my only critcisms. But somehow I can definitely see this in a club or a rave party. Keep it up man!

Hey, did you know that I make techno/trance too? do you mind checking that out for me?

[Secrets( trance wip)]

too generic

It sorta needs a melody to it and please a snare in there sometimes too like every downbeat on a 1/2 note. for example, 1 2 3 4 would be like 1 snare 3 snare with the kick going all the way through. I think I've over-explained haha. Yeah It seems like generic repetitive trance that could get boring after awhile. Try to "bring it out" also by like adding some background sounds too and things yno. Even so, I can definitely see this in a club with the bass blasting at full tilt no doubt. Keep it up man!

Hey did you know that I make trance too? Do you mind checking some of that out?

[XENOXX - A New beginning]

good job

wow cool. Good song bro, I am impressed. I love those filtering effects you used and especially the panning (or maybe that's just me). But this song feels like it's missing something, like some sort of substance in the background. It has a great melody and all, but just try to "bring it all out" if you know what I mean. Keep it up!

Hey, did you know that I make techno/trance too? Do you mind checking that out?

[First... Jam]

really good for a first song!

I will not constructively criticize a first song. I hate doing that.
I like to leave it the way it is so that people can see that "this was my first song" and "look how I have improved from my latest song". To tell you the truth, my first song was too bad to be put on newgrounds. It sucked so badly I almost deleted it but didn't. 53 seconds long.

5/5 >>>>>>>> (remember the deal)
7/10 for the song itself.

[How to Master Properly]

I LOVE THE MELODY!

this song deserves 5 and it's going on my favorites right away!
Make more like this. You don't know me, but I just love filtering effects in electronic music. Especially in the beginning when the lowpass cutoff begins to show the higher frequencies!
10*points
5/5
+1 fav
some food, water, shelter, and cookies to keep you going.

[Lightsworn]

I AM SO IMPRESSED

for your first song this is amazing. YOu will get good someday I can just tell. This itself already deserves an 8. If a first song get's an 8 you KNOW that's a good sign.

Why don't you try using FL studio for 49.99 U.S.D or just get the demo so you can't save and just save as an MP3 whenever your done and re-import into FL studio whenever you want to work on it again. (just drag from folder or harddrive into the pattern playlist. the 49.99 version can save as an FL studio file JUST so that you won't have to rearrange the notes all the time.

To tell you the truth, I make all of my songs with the demo version of FL studio.
Why don't you check them out?