DaveGuy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[P] - Ray of Hope]

omfg this got zerobombed?

It just feels like it's missing some substance to it. Like maybe another background sound that fills up that empty space.

Pezmobile responds:

Hmm... You're kinda right but i probably won't change anything.
Thanks for reviewing!

[Chilled 1]

Cool

audio listen #1. awesome. How does it feel to be the first person to submit audio to NG? i hate that highest pitch sound. Try to fix that up. NOt the lead, But that other background effect that sounds like a lizard or an insect or rat or something.

[:: Beat Killz (WIP) ::]

Yes plz finish it

This song is really cool . It got zerobombed too lol.

[Contagious [DEMO]]

Cool

Just a TEEEEEEENYWEEEEENY bit too much bass near the end and middle of the song. I loved the arp you used though. Try to remaster this and put in some treble sounds. Extend it also. =)

[La Scala (instrumental)]

Lol cool

YOu got my vote of 5. This song is really awesome. Just try to reduce the repetition abit. Thats my only criticism. Put some more melodies in there.
KUTGW

Do you mind checking out some of my techno music?

Lalalo14 responds:

Thank you very much! :D
haha yeah I know, it became sorta lame when I took out the vocals.

Yeah sure i'll be right on it

[Mad Cowz]

Lol

The drums are kinda annoying and you have to put background sounds and a melody in there...please.... when the bass comes in at 0:06, it kinda comes in off beat and the song get's "shifted" if you know what I mean? on the brightside It had a great moving feel to it.

durst057 responds:

yea, youre right

[RO - Wana Be Free (8Bit Remix)]

Cool

awesome melody but try to fix up that fuzzy bass or whatever that comes in at 0:14 and goes throughout the song. Because It just spoils the melody Try to replace it with another background sound because this song is kinda calming. Also the kick drum kinda sounds offtone. (don't give the kickdrum a musical tone, just have it as a regular kick. But anyway the melody was really catchy and all. good work man.

[TheMovement]

Cool

either DrumNBass or Techno, but mainly techno but this is just amazing. It sounds like the type of song that I would possibly make. I love the melody, best melody I've heard all day. you got my 5 vote and a 10 review KUTGW man. make more.

Check out some of my songs too, because I also make techno.

[March Of The Fungi]

cool

Great melodies you put in there. But it is missing quite ALOT in some parts of your song where it is just 1 or 2 high synths and a kick. Just needs some more background sounds or just sounds period. Those are my only criticisms though.
7 for melody 3/5 =)