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[Grand Adventure]

take it easy on the synths.

and on 1:01 it just gets transformed into something totally random.
And please make ur leading synth (the very beginning of the song) quieter throughout the song.

DJKitsune responds:

Thank you for the review. I will definately consider what you suggested and try to make my next song better with the advice.

[Forming Anesthetic]

its good but.

Its a good song for relaxiing, and its coming quite close to an ambient song.
Please make it alot more livelier, and i have to agree with HakitaSasaki, It gets repetitive & needs more kick on the bass. Surprisingly it still sounded good.

lidlurch responds:

thanks for the review! hm...yeah, deffinetly i'll work on that. i'll email all of you guys when i finish a second draft of the song

[Touhou- Alice's Theme (RGOrch)]

video game music, not trance dude

Sounds like acute type of creepiness, like the voodoo dolls. Pretty good yo, just add more background sounds to it dude. Keep up the good work.

Btw, i make techno music, why dont u check it out?

[The many lives of rena]

good yo.

Wow, I liked how u just started layering things on every period of seconds. Thats what makes this song good for a slow part of a video game. Keep up the good work yo. Just try adding a"bit" more liveliness to it like another sound or synth or something.

Say, why dont u check out my songs? I make techno music.

[Random Excercise]

lol sounds more like a video game song to me.

Just needs a alot more livelier bass, dude but the synth that comes in at 0:47 is what makes this song really good. Its just that bass would make it like chaos fantasy, trust me. One thing i also liked is that its in the same keytone as my song
"dreams of happiness" overall, the song i was cool.
you should check out my other songs too dude lol XD.

Connmann1015 responds:

yeah agreed on the bass thing. Dude you only have three songs and i did. i loved em!

[DataStream (DJ QuArTz)]

Its pretty good yo

Its good but, it just needs to have a REALLY loud bass, like the type u hear when people are blasting it out of their cars, if u did that, Then I would give it a 10/10. But the song right now is actually really good for dancing dude. Keep up the good work and Gl on future submissions.

would u mind checking out some of my songs? I also make techno music lol.

[[RM] - NeedAName WIP]

Good shyt!!!!

wow, im quite impressed, still not as good as chaos fantasy, but reallllly good job with the synths and the rising effect at 1:08 it just.. "gets u going".
Keep up the good work yo.

would u mind checking out some of my techno songs?
I would really appreciate it. XD

Randomizor responds:

Haha thanks for the review! =D

Sure ill go check out your stuff.

[BeatBoxing Drums]

srry dude

answer to what u said : not really. Try to improve ur singing

370wii responds:

I was being sarcastic, lol

[Corneria Remix]

........................wow

Realy good video game music dude, it would be good in those hero games and those 2D sonic games. Keep up the good work, I have no criticisms, 5/5 10/10.
Keep making more songs~XD~

Would u mind checking out some of my songs? I would really appreciate it XD

KillForChaos responds:

Sure I'll check out yours.

thanks for bringing back memories of sonic before he went anorexic : )

[[AriA] A Single Breath - WiP]

lol dude, umm..

This song is pretty good, its just good and short!!! plz oh plz make it longer, Im glad u said its still a work in progress. This good song song needs to be longer.

And also, anotehr thing, try not to take so much time actualy "getting into" the song. Because it was half done by the time it was "into" the song.
Other than that, it was still pretty cool. Keep uphte good work dude ~XD~

Would u mind checking out some of my songs? I woould really appreciate it. ~XD~

IndieDance responds:

hmm i like long intros, i guess its just a personal thing though? and yeahhh it still has a lot more to go hahhha. and suree ill take a look =]