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[Crazy Mix 1]

not bad

Just needs some work thats all. Try to make your bass synths not as distorted please. It is actually a really good hardcore melody to it. Just try to add more sounds in there. And basically just remaster it. Choose a different bass.

It's a really good start to making hardcore techno though =)

GL on future submissions bro.

DJ-Spark responds:

Thanks! I'll Try that out!

[[MW] Chillin' In The Rain]

THIS was your first song?

Wow I am quite impressed. I love it when I see people with 4/5 or better first songs. Good work bro. I am proud of you. My first song sucked. But I see a good future for you in music. You could become Gravey II (two). My only problem would have to be the repetition on this song. Try to put another melody in everynow and then please. But I do love that airy-rainforest effect you added.

4/5
9/10.

you deserve it

=)

[Reasoner- Ticking Away]

HOLY MOTHER OF GOD!!!!!!

646 votes
5772 listens
AND FREAKING 903,273 DOWNLOADS???????????!!!?!?!?!?!?!!!??
!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!???!?!?!?!???????!?!?
?!?!??!!!!???!!?!?!?!?????????????!!?
??????????????!?! WHat is the number one ranking song on ng? I wanna find out. One other thing also, why is it that there is 180times the amount of downloads than listens? that is not newgroundly possible. But how? I see alot of paragonx9's songs like that and some others too. But how can they have more downloads than listens? It just doesn't make sense.

[Danger Ahead]

wOw

this was your first song? SERIOUSLY? wow. I am quite impressed with you and your life. You are a talented person and you will be BIGGER than basshunter (I hope he doesn't see this) and all of the other electronic music makers out there. Keep up your good work!

[The Beat of Tomorrow]

WOW

This is the best "first" techno song I have ever heard. NO wonder it had such great ratings. You should DEFINITELY add onto this one and master it. Try to make it less repetitive also by adding some more melodies into there. I can definitely see the mastered version of this on top weekly 5. Try to get better at using the music program (I use FL Studio 8 for all of my songs). If you use fl studio 8 or 9, look for warbeats on youtube. mixing effects, automations, filtering effects etc. I can see you going somewhere with your music career. Keep it up bro!

[Breakdown (2008 Demo)]

dude.

this is a remix of this one song called fantranstic by Wip3out! Plz put it as a remix of this right a way. I don't want you getting banned with this awesome remix. If you don't believe me, just check, trust me, I am not the only one that will notice this.

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/s ims/index.php?songid=14103

[SubtleForces - The Sound]

woot!

awesome song! I can definitely see this in a club or a rave somewhere. If you put some of your songs on much music, chances are, most likely most of them will be on top20 on 20.

SubtleForces responds:

Thanks again for ur kind review and score :D

I hope it does, but ur song deserves it too :P

[B0UNC3 - Paradise on E]

ah so I found the original!

I saw a remix of this also in platform racing 2. This one is just as good. I really like it. It's almost better in fact! Man, your scores look way zerobombed. Here's a:
10*points
5/5
+1 fav song
one favorite artist, to keep you going =). Make some more 2009/10 submissions man! you will be on TV someday. (who knows you might have already been, correct me if I'm wrong).

[-C h ii p e r]

you are DEFINITELY onto something here...

It seems like you tried to make the song too complex and stuff. But when you later on make more songs, try going to youtube and finding out how to use the mixer and automations. Yes, the first time I heard this I was sooo confused haha.

Back on topic: Try not make it so repetitive. Nice melody you got in there those. Choose a better bass synth that doesn't sound distorted, or just add another background sound to it. Basically remaster it. This was ALOT better than my first song. It's too horrible to be on NG. I would have been lucky to get a 3 with my first song. Keep working on your skills and you could become really good someday! Because you definitely seem to be onto something here.

Do you mind checking out some of my techno music? I give you the knighthood honor of doing your FIRST music review on one of my songs! haha. =)