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great melodies

Just try to master it more; bring out the saws abit and raise the volume of the kick to make it sound punchy and more moving. Also I know you used platinium saw for one of them but choose something abit more audible.

This is just me nitpicking and being picky. Try these but if they don't work then just continue with the way it is.

5/5
9/10 bud
keep it up!

Indigorain responds:

Ok, thanks! :D
But I don't think I used a platinum saw.
I'll try to increase the kick, not too much, but I'll see what i can do :]
So you mean I need to increase the saw that has the same pattern as the intro? 'cause it's not really clear to me :P
But thanks very much for the review! :D

- I raised the kick volume a bit and brought out the saws as well :]

all hands

I put my hands up in the air at the happy, united, spacey feel to this song.

5/5
10/10

Chimy727 responds:

Yay daveguy is finally reviewing me again! XD
thanks man!
-chimy727

great melody

I see potential for this song but just don't jump into the melody right away and add another layering instrument with the same melody in the 2nd part of the chorus. Save the melody for the 2nd part of the first chorus and then add the extra instrument in the 2nd chorus. Same thing you told me in your review :)

DanceNation responds:

ahh well... see, i dont really make dance anymore, as far as full tracks go, so i make short quickie tracks.

great

the high pitched saw synth really cuts into the ears. why don't you use fruity free filter, have the filter on No Q, and decrease the frequency abit so it cut at the air.
Everything else is perfect for a hiphop beat, you have potential, you have talent sir.
5/5
9/10

GrantBowtie responds:

Hey thank you so much for the review. I know i should fix the saw but I was pretty eager to submit this.

You've come along way

You're gonna be big one day, just keep going at the music making.

(P.S.)
I've always wondered, how do you do that shortening filter effect to the synth @ 0:44 - 0:54? I've been searching forever on how to do it but I don't know what it's called.

ShootingStar responds:

Thanks a bunch :) Btw I'll tell you how to get the filter later :)

ShootingStar

great... nuff said

YO dude, what mastering plugin do you use? I need it for the bass in my music! I just used clear master preset on maximus for my songs.

ioneofmany responds:

Sometimes I use izotope ozone. Bass Boost is pretty sweet if you use it right as well. :)

pretty good

the parts with the vocals don't flow that well because the vocals need to be fixed up abit and the kick is flat. Everything else is good.

Cassidy-Morgan responds:

You got it DaveGuy!!! XD

Nice ambience

Dude i could totally use this for a video game! Sounds awesome. Good job! Maybe not techno though...

LangolierVII responds:

i know :P i randomly chose techno randomly

I'm currently a music producer, and a future club/party/rave/what ever DJ.
I also sing, write, and perform vocals cause I'm an Artist also (Boyowa, Artist name)

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