not bad
it doesn't sound housey enough, atm it sounds unmastered:
That lead saw that plays on a high C note constantly can get annoying because it's the only thing playing and it kind of cuts at the ears, choose a different instrument for that please. Fix the drums too because I can't hear the kick drum and the hat and clap seem abit presety. Also, try to add more stuff to go in the background, like maybe another bassline instrument/saw playing on the same melody as the current one and some background melodies, maybe an arp, maybe a pad in the background lol.
Although I do have to give you props for that rising pad effect @ 0:15 to 0:22, that was pretty cool. I hope I didn't batter you too much 0_o
All in all, I can definitely see you getting better at making house music; just keep working at it and you'll get better :),
in fact I made my first one afew days ago. Would you mind checking that one out please? It's called "Rainy Day", just go to my userpage and it will be there.
Thankyou
~DjDO~