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mastery

the lead synth in the beginning is way too loud and blockss out all other sounds. plus, raise the volume of the kick & drums.

Cheers
~DjDO~

["Forever Gone" - Etalo]

great

why did this have a rating of 3.94? zero bombers get you?

5/5
10/10 by me
3.95 / 5.00 = (+0.0074)

~DjDO~

[House in da House - Verack]

first time

Dude, this is amazing for your first house song. I can see you becoming really good at this in the future. Gl and keep up the good work!

Hey would you mind checking out my first house song too? I made one recently also :)
~DjDO~

[Xenoxx - A Pirate? (full)]

great

Great remix! I can dance to this AND use it in a space pirate game,

10/10
5/5 by me :)

~DjDO~

XenoxX responds:

LMAO

Thanks D00D!

[Once-more]

missing 1 thing

house music has to have a kick drum, please add some form of drumtrack.
Although the melodies and bass were nice

[[Cyme] It's Easy]

nice sounding

All you need to do now is just make the kick louder and less flat with a more oomph and an oomphy bassline and you're good to go! :)
Also, try to slightly decrease the amount of sidechain and raise the volume of clap/hat.
Nice clap and effects btw. XD

Hey could you check out one of my songs? I would appreciate it, thx :)
~DjDO~

Cyme responds:

Thank you very much for replying ;)

Thanks for the advice! This is the first time, I get some criticizm/tips from my listeners :) I will surely think of what you've said when I begin electrifying with the use of Fl Studio, as always ^^

I'll check out your songs immediately! ;D

[-E- The Drill2]

not bad

it doesn't sound housey enough, atm it sounds unmastered:

That lead saw that plays on a high C note constantly can get annoying because it's the only thing playing and it kind of cuts at the ears, choose a different instrument for that please. Fix the drums too because I can't hear the kick drum and the hat and clap seem abit presety. Also, try to add more stuff to go in the background, like maybe another bassline instrument/saw playing on the same melody as the current one and some background melodies, maybe an arp, maybe a pad in the background lol.

Although I do have to give you props for that rising pad effect @ 0:15 to 0:22, that was pretty cool. I hope I didn't batter you too much 0_o

All in all, I can definitely see you getting better at making house music; just keep working at it and you'll get better :),
in fact I made my first one afew days ago. Would you mind checking that one out please? It's called "Rainy Day", just go to my userpage and it will be there.
Thankyou

~DjDO~

Euphy responds:

Nice review, it's ok. :)