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[Suia-hausmaster]

preset

too many presets used in this (the drums mainly) and it sounds kind of cheesy because of that. Nice bass though, nice song structure and melody. it is housey.

[{Based} {W.I.P}]

good first hiphop song.

Seeing as it's your first song, I'm not going to give too much concrit, but i will tell you some basics:

give it a melody to top the bassline
add some stuff in the background and foreground
fix the kick drum to make it sound louder

for a simple beat, it has a good song arrangement: intro, buildup, bass comes in, etc...
for now, I wouldn't worry too much about fixing this song up because it's only your first.

How to get better:
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what happened with me is that I got new melody ideas which transformed into songs once at the keyboard and I never envision the entire song in my head then make it, always starts with a single melody idea either ranging from lead melodies to just a simple bassline. I discovered & experimented with different aspects of the music production program, I watched youtube tutorials and learned new effect techniques, and I asked newgrounders.

I'm excited to see stuff from you in the future :)
~DjDO~

[Viralited]

mastery

the lead synth in the beginning is way too loud and blockss out all other sounds. plus, raise the volume of the kick & drums.

Cheers
~DjDO~

["Forever Gone" - Etalo]

great

why did this have a rating of 3.94? zero bombers get you?

5/5
10/10 by me
3.95 / 5.00 = (+0.0074)

~DjDO~

[House in da House - Verack]

first time

Dude, this is amazing for your first house song. I can see you becoming really good at this in the future. Gl and keep up the good work!

Hey would you mind checking out my first house song too? I made one recently also :)
~DjDO~