heres a few words for you sir..
You deserve 10* points and a 5/5, some food, water, and shelter and some rum.. wha? hey, WHERES THE RUM?!?!!? That ol Davie Jones Locker stole it!!
heres a few words for you sir..
You deserve 10* points and a 5/5, some food, water, and shelter and some rum.. wha? hey, WHERES THE RUM?!?!!? That ol Davie Jones Locker stole it!!
I'm quite impressed
best first song ever. My first song was nothing to compare with this. In fact, it's not even on NG. It's that bad. It is ACTUALLY 2 preset synths, a sample kick and sample hat. 53 seconds long.
I am quite impressed at this though bro.
5/5
9/10
haha thanks man!
yeah this was pretty much all garageband haha.
i just cut everything up and changed the pitches on presets lol, but its good for what it is.
thanks for the review bud!
WOW
As simple as this may be, I think it definitely deserves a 5/5 just because of the saw that you chose and because of the filtering effects on the pads and that melody of that saw. I am truly crazy about filtering effects. I use them in all of my songs from now on now. I just LOVE that flanged/phased synth-saw you used near the end. Try to put some more of the beginning saw in there too. Yno, some melodies to fill up those empty spaces =)
Try to lower the repetition though, That is my only critique
I like your stuff
Your style of music some of the calmest but still hype trance I have ever listened to. So I am here to reward you for your awesomeness:
heres: 10*points, 5/5, +1 fav, some food, water, shelter and cookies to keep you going.
Make more like this. Do you use FL studio? That's what I use for my techno and trance.
Haha, thanks Dave! =D
OMG
is that YOU SINGING????? man you are so good at that type of singing to this type of pop. Keep with the good work bro, and keep away from the fish to stay alive.
Haha Will do! :) Thanks for th review.
yep
definitely 10
I follow tofu-squared's Idea of this song.
Heh, thanks!
MUCH BETTER
YES YES YES YES.!!!! Thx for taking my advice. you deserve 4.66 (+0.11) = 4.78, yes I know, NG got their math wrong.
Haha - woah - that's a first.. :) well, maybe it gets extra points for being that awesome!
Haha.Thanks for the review!
ShootingStar
guess what, I'm 14 haha.
It's actually a really good jumpstyle song with a good jumpstyle melody. Just try to put more kick in this song, not boost it, but just put it in MORE of the song. cause the buildup was a..bit too long. You seem to be going somewhere with your techno career though, Try improving on your skills and you could be REALLY good one day. Seeing as you and I are both young and have time to improve, why not? HAHA. No i'm not saying this song is bad. Don't get me wrong haha.
5/5
9/10
thanks for the review mate,
good help it is
cool
This song has a great composition. You seem to be very familiar with automations and filtering effects. But please try to just..LET everything out. This song sounds like it is missing WAY too much. This has a very nice melody and if it was remastered, I would love it so much. Nevermind about it saying house, this is actually more of a trancy song. But you can leave it in house because it is housy as well. You seem to be off to a very good start to this though. Just try not to make it too repetitive also. Please continue this.
yeah im already working on making it sound fuller and letting it out as you say. im also trying to make it a little longer, ill keep you posted on how im doing bud.
thanks for the great review!
I'm currently a music producer, and a future club/party/rave/what ever DJ.
I also sing, write, and perform vocals cause I'm an Artist also (Boyowa, Artist name)
Age 30, Male/They
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Canada
Joined on 7/23/09