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[.:Restart:.]

great

I have to say I am quite impressed. My only criticism would have to be the fact that it gets kinda repetitive after awhile. and hey, my brother "Isoken" is his username, uses that high pitched bell synth and moonray in his songs. you should check him out!

[Senior Citizens]

Yes, I understand you were bored but..

It has a nice tempo and all but please fix up that WAYYY distorted bas synth that sounds like a truck engine. And try to put some other sounds in there too. Add an extra melody in there also. And all you used was presets, try not to use too many presets in this songs, in fact, all songs. I'm not saying it's bad to use them, I'm saying it's bad to OVERuse them (lol people have gotten me wrong about that)

[Prologue (loop)]

Pretty cool yo.

I like how you made the song sound so far away by putting reverb on everything. (echoey deep far tunnel large far away mountains effect). Yes I know it's a loop that plays the same thing over and over again, but just try to add abit more variety to it. Because to tell you the truth, it's just a teensy weensy bit repetitive. Maybe put another melody in. Anyway it's your choice.

My apologies for the overly long review. =)

[I have a potion]

N.I. (Needs Improvement)

All you did was just take 2 video game presets and 2 drum presets that need to play out more throughout the song. To tell you the truth, this song's melody and drums sounded SOOO random. Put some background sounds in there and some other stuff too. fix up the melody please and master this.

Sorry about that overly long criticism, It's just that everytime I'm giving a song a low score, There had BETTER be criticism in my review. =)

Calamaistr responds:

Im sorry mate but i dont think you have any musical hearing if you think this is random. Granted its not a conventional pattern thats for sure. And who cares if a sound is a original, its not about the sound its about the composition afterall, why should i tamper with sounds if i already found what i needed being a retro 16bit analog.. wich is together with piano works the only thing i work with.

Oh, and welcome to the world of hybrid dnb retro spectrum.

[Frozen Fog]

wow amazing!

this is so cool! very relaxing indeed! kutgw man!

10* points
5/5
1 fav artist

[Don't Eat The Strudel]

guess what...

I just ate your strudel. Screw you, go ahead and cry. Buy another one from Tim Hortons for 3 bucks. I'll eat that one too and make you sob. I'll eat your dog too because it ate one of your other strudels. I just ate 3 of your strudels. How does that make you feel?

hahahaha lol. 10 points because of humour only. hhahahaha (if that was your intended purpose)

Klimdeeni responds:

purpose success!

[Lillium Techno Mix]

Needs work

You have an okay melody in there (just not catchy enough) and a good drumbeat too, It just needs to either equalize the bass synth and improve the quality and fix up the distortion of the bass and please don't put in so much phaser/flanger (whatever you use in fl studio, they give the same effect). Also, try to make it less repetitive and put some more background melodies and sounds and pretty much just master it.

It may look like I zerobombed it but I just have a high voting disposition, no I didn't give it a zero, this song doesn't deserve near zero.

Sorry about the overly long criticism, It's just that whenever I am giving a review a low score, I MUST put alot of criticism in there. so yeah...

2/5
5/10 bro.

Grimmace666 responds:

thanks for the review...dont worry i saved the song and im gonna remix it alot to make it great ^^...i just love the song so i wanted to mix it...but i will definatly remaster it

[ParagonX9 - Infiltration]

I have to say

I am quite impressed with your music. I am not surprised at the fact that it is so popular. This song fits it's title perfectly. It reminds me of the MATRIX crew "infiltrating" a secret base. People will use this in their movies and give you a large dividend of their movie profits. KUTGW
10/10
5/5
+1 added to my fav songs
+1 DOWNLOAD
and you just got yourself your 1,293,485,293,933,101,283,586,293,348 ,390,583,312th favorite artist. (just an overly exaggerated guess lol).

Seeing as you are a natural professional at DnB and technoish music and what not, would you mind checking out afew of my songs? I would actually like to hear from someone who know's completely what they are talking about. =)

[OnTop MIX (MIG)]

Cool

My only problem is that lead high pitch squeal synth needs to come down one octave. It's kinda annoying. It has a good melody and everything else, it's just that one thing =).
4/5
9/10 bro.