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[{Based} {W.I.P}]

good first hiphop song.

Seeing as it's your first song, I'm not going to give too much concrit, but i will tell you some basics:

give it a melody to top the bassline
add some stuff in the background and foreground
fix the kick drum to make it sound louder

for a simple beat, it has a good song arrangement: intro, buildup, bass comes in, etc...
for now, I wouldn't worry too much about fixing this song up because it's only your first.

How to get better:
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what happened with me is that I got new melody ideas which transformed into songs once at the keyboard and I never envision the entire song in my head then make it, always starts with a single melody idea either ranging from lead melodies to just a simple bassline. I discovered & experimented with different aspects of the music production program, I watched youtube tutorials and learned new effect techniques, and I asked newgrounders.

I'm excited to see stuff from you in the future :)
~DjDO~

[Viralited]

mastery

the lead synth in the beginning is way too loud and blockss out all other sounds. plus, raise the volume of the kick & drums.

Cheers
~DjDO~

["Forever Gone" - Etalo]

great

why did this have a rating of 3.94? zero bombers get you?

5/5
10/10 by me
3.95 / 5.00 = (+0.0074)

~DjDO~

[[Fiji]Beyond Compulsion Remix]

wow

Nice mastering and an overall great remix

5/5
10/10
by me

~DjDO~

MrFijiWiji responds:

thnx dave!

[J.D. - In My Head [AMP Remix]]

100th review

10/10
5/5
nuff said

[House in da House - Verack]

first time

Dude, this is amazing for your first house song. I can see you becoming really good at this in the future. Gl and keep up the good work!

Hey would you mind checking out my first house song too? I made one recently also :)
~DjDO~

[Bulletproof (Distrix Remix)]

wow

amazing job with mixing the genres, this is electrohouse AND funk at the same time.

5/5
10/10 by me

~DjDO~

DISTRIX responds:

Haha, thanks for the review! :D

[Xenoxx - A Pirate? (full)]

great

Great remix! I can dance to this AND use it in a space pirate game,

10/10
5/5 by me :)

~DjDO~

XenoxX responds:

LMAO

Thanks D00D!

[Once-more]

missing 1 thing

house music has to have a kick drum, please add some form of drumtrack.
Although the melodies and bass were nice

[[Cyme] It's Easy]

nice sounding

All you need to do now is just make the kick louder and less flat with a more oomph and an oomphy bassline and you're good to go! :)
Also, try to slightly decrease the amount of sidechain and raise the volume of clap/hat.
Nice clap and effects btw. XD

Hey could you check out one of my songs? I would appreciate it, thx :)
~DjDO~

Cyme responds:

Thank you very much for replying ;)

Thanks for the advice! This is the first time, I get some criticizm/tips from my listeners :) I will surely think of what you've said when I begin electrifying with the use of Fl Studio, as always ^^

I'll check out your songs immediately! ;D